Laurence Branson

Can't say I've read the novella but I have seen the movie. And I do NOT recommend it. haha

Wow. This was very good. I don't really like poems but I liked this one because it was simple and yet clever (especially the last stanza, putting it all together). ...

Thanks guys, I have taken on your advice and I have rewritten the story to a great extent. I ended up making it third person so that I could capture ...

hahah that was hilarious.

I'm sorry if you had felt you had wasted your time with the review. My response to the review was not me defending myself. While I may have blamed a ...

I hardly see a review as helpful when it accuses me of not bothering to proof-read. Of course i proof-read the story. I just missed some errors. Are you telling ...

Well, I wrote it on the spot without intending to put it on this website but then decided later, at the advice of my brother who also read it (and ...

Wow. Thank you for that line-by-line analysis, joshuapaul. This story was actually written on the spot, and perhaps that's why the opening line seems a bit funny. I wrote that ...

Hey, Thanks for the comment. The story didn't have any message to it. It was merely something I wrote to pass the time; I didn't intend it to be a ...

Thanks. Well, it seems I definitely need to work on my ending. I guess I wasn't clear enough as to who the narrator was. Shouldn't be too hard to fix. ...

The narrator is a ghost and the ghost is part of her imagination that developed from her paranoia. This explains why the ghost vanishes at the end once the engine ...

Thank you very much. My writing style has been greatly influenced by Stephen King and I understand why you see it as very unique. I got the idea of making ...